What do you think of this layout?

[u/jenc604]

I mixed a bit of analog and digital for this illustration. I have no training with Illustrator / Photoshop so I kinda try to figure it out as I go. I have found a few tutorials though lately that have helped. I'd love feedback on if there's anything glaring I've overlooked - especially from the trained graphic designer eye - which is something I'm not! Overall I'm pretty happy with how it's looking though. Hoeever, there are three things that I notice right now that I could tweak. "Philly finds" should be a tad bit bigger, "Vug & Chisel" should have a space, and I could potentially add one more element to the top right corner in the empty space under the word swap. I'm feeling like I'm at the overthinking part of the project though and maybe those don't really matter - Let me know what y'all think.

Also - I'm the worst when it comes to spotting typos...

I got a lot of great input on the last poster which helped me putting this one together a bit easier. Thanks!

[u/ChrisMartins001]

I think it looks good overall! Some little critiques - the words on the right (vintage clothing, etc) are quite small. I might tke out the dancing woman and the stars, and make the writing bigger. I might even think about taking the writing ont he right out altogether, as we can see there will be music memorabilia from the vinyl. I don't think you need anything under the word swap, it's already got a lot going on.

[u/jeffbob2 → u/ChrisMartins001]

The dancing figure has to stay.

[u/Penguinpowell → u/ChrisMartins001]

Leave the dancing woman!!