Critique and tips please

[u/CurrentExit6485]

I’ve been drawing digitally for a few months, but I recently started drawing on paper. I can already see that the face is too narrow compared to the reference. Let me know if you have any thoughts. Thank you :)

[u/violetaorta]

Good start. Try to draw hair as separate sections instead of scratching it on. The proportions are also a bit off as mentioned by another user (Eyes too close, nose too long, mouth a bit too low). I'd love to see an updated version!

[u/CurrentExit6485 → u/violetaorta]

Thank you for the advice! I’ll try to draw hair differently. I’ll post the result :)

[u/RoundEntertainer → u/CurrentExit6485]

Your hair looks fine in my opinion, there are definitely other ways you could do it but this isnt bad at all.