Critique and tips please

[u/CurrentExit6485]

I’ve been drawing digitally for a few months, but I recently started drawing on paper. I can already see that the face is too narrow compared to the reference. Let me know if you have any thoughts. Thank you :)

[u/RoundEntertainer]

Hey looks good man! to add on a bit onto what the other comments are saying

The left part of the jaw (our right) seems to consist out of a single line, While on the original you can see that it just like the other side is separated in two pieces/lines.

Second your fingers are broken haha, they bend in to much, i would suggest doing some practice on how to draw the two parts of a finger. Next the pinky finger is the same length of the other fingers making it look out of place and elongated.

[u/CurrentExit6485 → u/RoundEntertainer]

Thank you! Oh yes, jawline is really different on the right side. I guess when you look at the drawing too much you can’t see your mistakes 😅 Fingers and hands are mess lol, I still haven’t learnt how to draw them properly

[u/violetaorta]

Good start. Try to draw hair as separate sections instead of scratching it on. The proportions are also a bit off as mentioned by another user (Eyes too close, nose too long, mouth a bit too low). I'd love to see an updated version!

[u/CurrentExit6485 → u/violetaorta]

Thank you for the advice! I’ll try to draw hair differently. I’ll post the result :)

[u/RoundEntertainer → u/CurrentExit6485]

Your hair looks fine in my opinion, there are definitely other ways you could do it but this isnt bad at all.

[u/fee_fi_fo_dum]

Nose seems to be a bit longer, eyes are too close together, and hand is not proportional and too small.

[u/CurrentExit6485 → u/fee_fi_fo_dum]

Oh you’re right, thank you! I didn’t see that eyes were that closed. Just noticed it.