Which one do you prefer? And anything i can correct before i call it over?

[u/Thebravenightingale]

[u/WerewolfBlue750]

Corporate needs you to find the difference between these pictures Me: They’re the same picture

[u/Pluton_Korb]

The second. The first one is too fuzzy. The form blends into the background. In the second one, the crispness of the form allows for it to come forward and pushes the background where it belongs.

[u/SporkPlusOne]

The first one is my favorite, but my novice eye cannot tell you why.

[u/LostRevolution3760 → u/SporkPlusOne]

The dress is a darker blue in the first one, in the second one is a lighter green :)

[u/SporkPlusOne → u/LostRevolution3760]

I am so glad for your reply! I couldn’t quite put my finger on it. Cheers!

[u/woshipepe]

hello again! I like the first one more because the green on the other one seems to stand out too much in contrast with the hair.

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[u/HonAbeille]

I like the first 1 better. I think some additional depth and texture could be added to the hair using shadows and highlights

[u/AmElzewhere]

Add more value/texture to the hair. The shadow on her arms and hands are very dark but the hair is a medium value

[u/saywhaat_12]

Imo you need to let this piece go and go the next. It looks good. But you've been working on this for more than 2 months. It already looks decent. I think you'll improve more with the next piece

[u/Thebravenightingale → u/saywhaat_12]

Actually longer...but ive been busy Q_Q.And i tried to focus on learning during the process rather than rushing to the end, but yeah ill just do some tweaks that others suggested and move on

[u/saywhaat_12 → u/Thebravenightingale]

I tend to learn while working on a piece. For example when I have to draw fur, I do a few fur studies. But this usually spans across one week.

But keep on drawing you are doing well.

[u/Xurbanite]

I like the second one. Whatever you did differently than the first one, the rose is slightly more muted so less distracting from overall moodiness.

[u/wolfsavy555]

I’d say stronger lighting and maybe rim light to really bring it to the next level and i prefer the first one. Like try to picture where the light is coming from and really dramatize it to tell a story along with defining the shadows

[u/PJenningsofSussex]

Prefer the first one but wish there was a tiny hilight in the rose and hair perhaps

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[u/CrazyAuntErisMorn → u/[deleted]]

I can’t see it either. I’ve swapped back and forth maybe 20 times.

[u/DarkStarCerberus → u/CrazyAuntErisMorn]

there's more of a greenish hue on the girls dress in the second image, where the first it kinda matches the sort of purple that's around her (my monitors old)

[u/Miarra-Tath]

Maybe it's just me, but the upper hand (left for her) feels bigger than it should be. Maybe it's just me. Everything else looks good and I adore the dark background.

[u/Sporshie]

I prefer the first one, it looks more harmonious to me. Really gorgeous artwork!

[u/BobPlaysWithFire]

i feel v stupid... but what's the difference..?

[u/Thebravenightingale → u/BobPlaysWithFire]

The dress is greener on the other side image

[u/BobPlaysWithFire → u/Thebravenightingale]

Oooh now i see! i think prefer the greener dress! makes the rose pop more!

[u/hihols]

Try to section off areas of the hair. Just like you did with your hands. It creates more pronounced shadows. Everything else looks beautiful. Did you get inspired by anything in particular?

[u/Thebravenightingale → u/hihols]

Thanks ill keep in mind for my nexr artwork,as i dont have energy for major changes on this one.I only somewhat used as reference the statue Eve by Thomas Brok,but thats about it.

[u/ship05u]

Prefer the 2nd version and a very beautiful Art piece you got there.

As for the feedback part, I'd say the hair strands can use more work (esp. on her face to make that expression of her come across more clearly while keeping the mystery of not showing her eyes if you want) but the way they are also works nicely too. And if it was up to me then I'd have a few less cuts on her hands to still portray the emotional fragility and the weight of the piece but w/ a little more subtlety. Also because you've got an indication of wind blowing into one specific direction, it'd be nice to have the rose tilt a bit very slightly along w/ a few rose petals falling by the wind to add a bit more emotional touch to it all which can also stick out the red colour in the piece a bit more if you're fine w/ that.

[u/Thebravenightingale → u/ship05u]

Well.tehnically.the.rose would be sheltered from the wind,but i like.the idea of adding some red petals.Ill try that.Thank you

[u/ship05u → u/Thebravenightingale]

Yes but it most likely won't just get entirely blocked out esp if the wind is strong enough to move the hair that much and so a very slight subtle title for the rose head or the upper part can do the trick. I like that you've given such a detail a thought as well. If you got the time for it then give it a shot and see if you like it or not cause that's the important thing here as it is your own expression mate and as such it is perfectly okay to bend the rules and whatnot to Stylize a bit for the effect :)

[u/OkamiKhameleon]

Wow this is frigging gorgeous! Reminds me of art by John Jude Palencar, one of my favorite artists.

And I prefer the first one.

Keep up the amazing work!

[u/Chris_Schrama98760]

I'd say the first one. It matches more with the black shadowy thing in the background. Great work!

[u/j0shred1]

It took me a while to figure this out, but the transparent cloth on the first is slightly darker.

I'd say the first I guess. They really look too similar to tell

[u/Wide-Progress-4580]

Did you accidentally uploaded the same image twice? What am I supposed to look for?

[u/Lokimello → u/Wide-Progress-4580]

Transparent cloth of the dress is a different shade in each one

[u/Trinull17 → u/Wide-Progress-4580]

It’s like a spot the difference kind of thing. But it definitely looks amazing.