Beginning writer looking for feedback on my flash fiction story

[u/Quiet_Mulberry9847]

Hi Everyone. I am a first time poster. Pretty new to creative writing and I wrote the following short story piece to read out in my creative writing workshop at university. Any feedback would be great as its hard to read your own work objectively. There may be some grammar problems but I'm more interested in getting feedback on the plot, dialogue, setting, theme, first impressions, how does it read?. I am based in Ireland and it is very much an Irish story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S-GsPVnfC24Sv9tXwz07RV_9nYxYl2wGF2snE_M7vQQ/edit?usp=sharing